(350) Boys Will Be Boys (Children’s Poem) Comments

Even though I am older now (retired) , I still enjoy reading children's poems. This was hilarious, and we do need to be laughing at ourselves.

Mel, you write the action so well. Brilliantly funny piece. You get top mark me and thanks for sharing it. David

Wah, a very great and interesting poem................i guess i have to work harder to improve....^_^haha, kampateh! ! !

For a minute, i thought you were writing this poem about me and my three sons when they were still young kids..it was just so perfect..the mom, the boys, the hat and the old ugly rat..i can't help smiling...great write..thanks for sharing :)

Delightful piece Melvina! How clever you are!