Tuesday, August 2, 2016

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I want you to imagine a country
where violence and crime do not exist
prisons could be turned in to something else
like homes or shops
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 04 August 2016

Profanisaurus, i just read 343. very nice. not that it will ever happen, but................one can hope/wish/pray. i liked your repetitious use of want and can. and the rest of your construction and thoughts were very fine. i'll send to MyPoemList and put in AUGUST'S a showcase for PH poets. bri ;) have a tooth fairy wand-filled evening!

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