331. Comments

Profanisaurus, re 331 leaving a huge puddle on the floor ...............i think it was this line which gave me a BIG laugh. ;)) ) and the last line was 'telegraphed' just enough (though i was thinking literally of an ice cube, not a cold person): i tend to be silly i guess. a great ending to a great poem. thanks. this is going into MyPoemList and also into my/OUR July 2016 a showcase for PH poets, found as a poem in my list of PH poems. search for July 2016 a showcase..... bri :)