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All the girls I have seen today
seem so sad and frightened
in this quietly thriving town
why is that so
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 16 May 2016

Suggested title: all the girls

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Bri Edwards 16 May 2016

Very intriguing poem. Not sure how accurate your appraisals are; you lump them all together! ! But maybe using social medial (like poemhunter? ?) Is better than drowning one's self in booze or 'meth ' or too much marijuana. Maybe you could approach one and explore her character, assuming this poem is from your experiencs. Bri :)

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