.32) Short Order Diner Comments

Are we real? Well, if make-believe is comfort, go for it, you are a poet after all! Linda

Nice poem Max. In L2 'takes my Order' is formal and normal. Some other way of saying this would make this poem better. Thank you.

now that is a content person! good for you Max! ! HBH

Nice little piece, Max. Simple and lyrical. I enjoyed it.