Tuesday, November 29, 2022

32 Degrees Comments

Rating: 4.9

Just before the first snow comes,
The lake nearby is overcome
An icy shield is spread around,
Those underneath are safe and sound.
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Meredith B.
COMMENTS
Richard Wlodarski 27 November 2024

A fresh take on a season that so many dislike. Your wonderful poem has primed me to start liking winter a little more. Thank You, Meredith!

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Sandra Feldman 26 November 2024

The icy feel of winter so beautifully said and when read, felt!

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Made a revisit. Enjoyed this beautiful poem once again. I live in the equatorial Kerala and ice/snow I have come across only in my Frigidaire… so, good to read again

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Jayne Louise Davies 10 December 2022

Love this! Thank for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 10 December 2022

Though no birds may be apparent, there may be 'winter birds', some of which have descended from 'the North', e.g. Snowy Owls, Redpolls, and Snow Buntings, ...or at least their used to be. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 10 December 2022

I LOVE the poem, its theme, rhyming, & flow. I give stars; did I mention already?

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Bri Edwards 10 December 2022

'Those underneath are safe and sound.' ...'safe', except maybe from 'ice fishermen (or is it now 'ice fisherpersons'?) , and predator fish.

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Chinedu Dike 04 December 2022

A beautiful piece with vivid imagery

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Charlotte M. 01 December 2022

This is such a great poem! It just flows so easily!

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