Monday, November 27, 2006

32 - Cinderella Comments

Rating: 5.0

Running towards her pumpkin
At the stroke of midnight
Her lost slipper upon the stair
In the silver majestic moonlight
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Sarah Mcrae 13 June 2013

lovely :) great job with this one.

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Ana Monnar 03 September 2007

That was good! You created your poem very cleverly.

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Duncan Wyllie 19 May 2007

Those last two lines so fitting, Love shall conquer all! Love duncan X

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Tailor Bell 04 December 2006

that moment of despair between the evenning joy and morning discover is well portrayed in this verse. fine write, Nicola. -Tailor

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Original Unknown Girl 27 November 2006

How beautifully you capture this fairytale! I liked this poem a lot Nicola..... great write! HG: -)

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nicola burkett

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