314. What Does Not Kill Me Will Only Disappoint Me Comments
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What does not kill me will only disappoint me
what only weakens me must burn and die
though my wings are bruised and broken
still you will not stop me if I spread them to fly
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i like how you almost duplicated stanza one at the end. i'll get this into May's showcase soon, but i've almost run out of time on library's computer today. our computer is 'down'. : (
thanks,
bri :)
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i like how you almost duplicated stanza one at the end. i'll get this into May's showcase soon, but i've almost run out of time on library's computer today. our computer is 'down'. : ( thanks, bri :)