Sunday, May 8, 2016

308. All Alone Comments

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All alone he walks by her side
holding an umbrella so they don't get soaked
appreciating her company at all times
and laughing at jokes no one else hears
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Dr Antony Theodore 09 May 2016

At the moment he's happy to keep waiting for her to notice his presence until that time he will spend every day with her if only in his dreams.... a peculiar state of mind.. one spontaneouly asks. why doesnt he have the guts to go to her and tell that he loves her? but he loves to wait until she notices and understands that he loves her..... strange are sometimes our reactions.... you have portrayed this peculiar state of mind in a fine way. thank you. tony

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