Sunday, November 6, 2016

307. Journey Through A Desert Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am walking, walking alone
With sorrowful mind and painful heart
In the evening sands
Filled with the light of darkness.
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Dipankar Sadhukhan
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Nandita Sengupta 02 December 2016

Beautifully written.10

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Sarmistha Mukherjee 06 November 2016

An excellent poem deserving 10.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 06 November 2016

A nice and impressive poem.Good job!

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Indira Renganathan 06 November 2016

nature is such that day is followed by night daily...sun can not turn back to ask dark not to follow either...we, humans have nothing than to hope and wait for the light of our turn..being bold to face the obstacles learning how to cross over the dark phase is the only wise way...if there is no dark how can we find the light... everything is by divine command only for our good comprehension....good poem..God bless you- 10

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