Friday, September 11, 2009

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Everybody says that
we are nipper to be in love.
But, I want to ask them
what is the real age to be in love? ? ? ? ? ?
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rahul sharma
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Paul Hansford 26 September 2009

You can be in love at any age. See my poem The First Time for an example.

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Shekhar Joshi 14 September 2009

well yeah romantic.....and nice comparisions...... but its like to me it seems like there is something wrong with it.......u could have written better.....well i don't know.....just seems like that to me...........

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Shilpa Luthra 14 September 2009

very romantic and touchy one. good job done....

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Mubeen Sadhika 13 September 2009

Romantic thoughts beautifully captured. Liked a lot.

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Autumn Jones 11 September 2009

It's a very good write. And you did a good job sticking to the theme. Thanks for the suggestion I give it a 9.

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June30 Tara 11 September 2009

Love can’t be confined…and you have nicely captured the flow The person for whom you wrote this will definitely be impressed And so am I… :)

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Ency Bearis 11 September 2009

a great simile of love poem..nice write and its beautiful.....10

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there is a poet in me! 11 September 2009

nice...a good poem.. liked reading it....

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