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You can be in love at any age. See my poem The First Time for an example.

well yeah romantic.....and nice comparisions...... but its like to me it seems like there is something wrong with it.......u could have written better.....well i don't know.....just seems like that to me...........

very romantic and touchy one. good job done....

Romantic thoughts beautifully captured. Liked a lot.

It's a very good write. And you did a good job sticking to the theme. Thanks for the suggestion I give it a 9.

Love can’t be confined…and you have nicely captured the flow The person for whom you wrote this will definitely be impressed And so am I… :)

a great simile of love poem..nice write and its beautiful.....10

nice...a good poem.. liked reading it....