Saturday, November 9, 2013

30 Years Comments

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If I had my will
I would’ve clocked back thirty years
With her on the Ferris wheel!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 September 2014

Oh! what an imagination.......very well composed with nostalgic memories and wishes.......very very nice

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New imaginations which made into a beautiful poem and recited in its spirit.

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David Mclansky 09 May 2014

Thirty years has come and gone, Who sings the chorus of our songs; Who hums the lingering melody Of what was our brief harmony?

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 06 February 2014

still lurking there in your eyes gleam still stirring there a dream.... what a fabulous peace! . what a strong love! what a memories digged in heart!

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Adeline Foster 17 January 2014

Could we all but go back. Good write. Read mine - We The Unencumbered - Adeline

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Valsa George 13 November 2013

A whimsical urge to retrace our steps and travel back to time when in childish enthusiasm, munched the pop corn and licked the ice cream and revolved round the merry go round! Very beautiful, invoking nostalgic memories!

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Wahab Abdul 10 November 2013

wow, very nice one.. liked it very much...

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