Enjoyed this...Your employment of both Free & Prosaic Verse works well...Segments of the work remind me of Poe...Just a grammatical suggestion based on observation...The letter (I) should always be upper cased when by itself, or used as a contraction, IE: I'm, I'll... Solid crafting, Partha...~FjR~
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Enjoyed this...Your employment of both Free & Prosaic Verse works well...Segments of the work remind me of Poe...Just a grammatical suggestion based on observation...The letter (I) should always be upper cased when by itself, or used as a contraction, IE: I'm, I'll... Solid crafting, Partha...~FjR~