Friday, July 24, 2015

30 Years From Now Comments

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i am yet alive
as a poet never dies
i am yet alive
as death has not loved me that much
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PARTHA SARATHI PAUL
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Enjoyed this...Your employment of both Free & Prosaic Verse works well...Segments of the work remind me of Poe...Just a grammatical suggestion based on observation...The letter (I) should always be upper cased when by itself, or used as a contraction, IE: I'm, I'll... Solid crafting, Partha...~FjR~

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PARTHA SARATHI PAUL

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