Wednesday, February 22, 2006

.30) The Sense Of Touch Comments

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I hold the steering wheel
of the car in my hands,
I hold the world,
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Max Reif
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... ... 22 February 2006

didn't like this as much as the crew of 1976 poem although the final 2 lines were a great close. one thing i'll say about both poems is the line breaks seem to me to be a bit out of sync sometimes for example the opening two lines of this poem.

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