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Lovely colour themes- keep on writing*

Pleading November rain the red stained dove cry She has a role to play In the game of deception and slay For flying high in the circling sky, IT ONLY GENERATES COMPASSION FOR THOSE WHO DO SUCH AN ACT FOR REWARD OF NOTHING.. ONLY HUMAN TRAGEDY....... I BLEED FOR THOSE PEOPLE WHO LOOSE THEIR LIVES FOR SUCH ACTS... BEAUTIFULLY CRAFTED AND I LOVED IT.....10 READ MINE BULLET PROFF.....PORA PORA PORA.....MARTYRS

sad but true.... informative as well as innovative.... ....i may not be broad enough to understand the true rage and pain enflamed in your heart but do take note of the awareness spread through this...... thank you for exposing pains for an Indian.....

An empathic poem and I register my prayers for the victims and …thank you to bring alive us from slothful psyche …well poets are mirror of pre and contemporary events …vigil as Conscience to Roar against such atrocities … when peace will come…still poets’ nibs will never nip off…from scribble.. 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Yes. A nice poem. Feelings well expressed and it should be always like that these hateful actions all over the world to be condemned by people through their words of feelings. I'v e also written one on the terrorists who attacked Mumbai on 26.11.2009. That is not yet posted here, I will do that and would request you to read it - title of that poem is 'Before You Die' Thanks for sharing. Gautam

I appreciate the rhythm in the poem