Tuesday, August 25, 2020

30,000,000 Evil People Comments

Rating: 5.0

They came from all walks of life.
Men, women even the young.
All evil.
Thirty million.
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Shaun Cronick
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Shaun Cronick 25 October 2020

Dominic this is the figure or estimate made today in these time by the current Vatican estimates.

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Shaun Cronick 25 October 2020

Thanks again Ace of Black Hearts and congratulations on your recent and well deserved Poem of the Day. Take care good sir and thanks again.

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Shaun Cronick 03 October 2020

Dominic this was originally much longer. For that is my weakness is writing too much and usually too long winded. Too over-descriptive most times. Just got to learn to be a bit more ruthless and draconian in the editing process. Thanks again and take care.

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Shaun Cronick 28 August 2020

Thanks Dominic and well spotted with anaphora, used to project its repeated dramatic message. Thanks again and I'm glad you liked it. Take care.

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Shaun Cronick 28 August 2020

Thank you Rose Marie for your most gracious and so kind comments. Take care.

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Shaun Cronick 28 August 2020

Ace Of Hearts thank you for your superb comment. And I'm glad you enjoyed reading it Thanks again and take care.

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Dominic Windram 27 August 2020

Excellent poem Shaun..I particularly like your use of anaphora, ' thirty million people' to enhance the dramatic effect as well as the highly original religious imagery that runs through the poem.. It's definitely a titantic ten from me!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 August 2020

What a gripping and deeply poignant poem. A work of a mind with great imgination. A powerful title that magically draws a reader to read the whole write. Yes, evil will never prevail. A beautifully crafted and well executed write. To my Poem List.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 25 August 2020

Wow excellent poem, good job man, your story was captivating.

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