3-Will Work For Food Comments

You are blessed to have such caring, thoughful children, of course the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Congratulations on raising such wonderful children. I hope this poem has a large audience. Thankyou for sharing Mary, I certainly enjoyed the read.---Melvina---

my kids would feel the pain of other's just like me.powerfull line, great poem, ,

Humanity at its best... beautifully done, Mary! Brian

The honesty and pure empathy of youth Portrayed in its finest. A true portrait of 'respect your elders' and compassion for a less fortunate. Loved it. - K.

Hi Mary! Like this a lot. I see what you mean, mine is similar to this: -) Quite a rare subject don't you think? Something not enough people think about. A 10 from me!

So simple and so direct. I'm crying Mary

I don't know how you do it every time. This is really good work and I think it will touch everyone who reads in some way and make them think twice.

awww thats a realy lovely poem i like it a lot

This bowls over even a cynic like myself. Excellent job Mary. H

Beautiful Mary. You must be very proud of your children. I would be. GS

Nice story, sweet sentiments.

Very nice. Sounds like your teaching your kids the right way to be. :) Another good one!

Simply beautiful, Mary!