Monday, February 6, 2006

3 Stages Of Grief Comments

Rating: 4.2

The Torment

Sorrow swalowed me into the cruel black sea,
The icy cold water washed over me,
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Bridgid Patrick
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Mine Yours 05 December 2008

your biog. says you only put a pen to paper; if thats true i wish i had a pen like yours! ! ! 10+

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~ Jon London ~ 23 May 2008

Wow! ! ! ! ........what an amazing poetess you are Bridgid...such beautiful expression..excellent visual imagery that paints the perfect picture for the perfect poem......This is that very poem....*10* Thanks for sharing your brilliance best wishes Jon

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Paul Butters 27 April 2008

An intensely beautiful poem clearly created at great expense. Best Wishes. Paul.

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Tailor Bell 21 October 2006

great message and nice imagery. enjoyed this...nice work. -Tailor B.

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 25 February 2006

an excellent poem on a universal topic that i am sure many can relate to!

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Duncan Wyllie 25 February 2006

Bridgid this is full of hope.I really love your outlook.Love Duncan

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Esther Leclerc 23 February 2006

Thank you for expressing these stages so well. At the time, the future seems impossible, the present 'torment' being so painful... Having lost three important people in my life, I appreciate this poem so much. Thank you!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 20 February 2006

This shows that you are quite capable of different styles and your feel of meter is spot on. Spelling error 'reign' Best H

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Graham Jones 20 February 2006

Most of us can say been there, seen it, done it, but in verse you have captured those feelings so well and shown another side of your charactor as an up and coming poet, well done. Regards Graham.

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Scarborough Gypsy 19 February 2006

An excellent rendition of the emotions we go through. Good rhyme and pace too. Particularly related to the first stanza and re lived those feelings that I had when I lost my dad. Nice work Gyp's

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Tomás O Cárthaigh 16 February 2006

A great summary of grief... and great to see the moving on feature at the end.

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Willow Moon Pearce 09 February 2006

I liked it very much and so much thought behind it! ................willow

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Hugh Cobb 06 February 2006

A very good poetic view of grief and emerging from it. All the best, Hugh

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***** ********* 06 February 2006

A very positive look at grief Bridgid. 10 from Tai

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