The Torment
Sorrow swalowed me into the cruel black sea,
The icy cold water washed over me,
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Wow! ! ! ! ........what an amazing poetess you are Bridgid...such beautiful expression..excellent visual imagery that paints the perfect picture for the perfect poem......This is that very poem....*10* Thanks for sharing your brilliance best wishes Jon
An intensely beautiful poem clearly created at great expense. Best Wishes. Paul.
great message and nice imagery. enjoyed this...nice work. -Tailor B.
an excellent poem on a universal topic that i am sure many can relate to!
Bridgid this is full of hope.I really love your outlook.Love Duncan
Thank you for expressing these stages so well. At the time, the future seems impossible, the present 'torment' being so painful... Having lost three important people in my life, I appreciate this poem so much. Thank you!
This shows that you are quite capable of different styles and your feel of meter is spot on. Spelling error 'reign' Best H
Most of us can say been there, seen it, done it, but in verse you have captured those feelings so well and shown another side of your charactor as an up and coming poet, well done. Regards Graham.
An excellent rendition of the emotions we go through. Good rhyme and pace too. Particularly related to the first stanza and re lived those feelings that I had when I lost my dad. Nice work Gyp's
A great summary of grief... and great to see the moving on feature at the end.
I liked it very much and so much thought behind it! ................willow
A very good poetic view of grief and emerging from it. All the best, Hugh
your biog. says you only put a pen to paper; if thats true i wish i had a pen like yours! ! ! 10+