Thursday, January 8, 2009

3 Pretty Smile 3 Comments

Rating: 3.2

Little girl sitting upon the chair
He, with his professional glare,
Tipping and tapping, as her nerves twitch
Scratching his scratch with his humorous itch
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Amy
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Talented, youg lady! Interesting poem. Well penned; D

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Hiding Nothing 18 April 2009

That is so cool, it could have so many different meanings

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Kevin Fisher 16 April 2009

interesting its basic but I like that in a poem keep it up

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Stephen Stirk 18 February 2009

A very well written and mature piece of poetry. Really enhoyed it Steve

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lovely poem about the most simplist thing...a pretty smile good job Amy!

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Kesav Easwaran 21 January 2009

a poem pretty good, Amy...good rhyming...good flow...brought a heartfelt smile in me reading your narration on 'she and he'...10

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Kite Remedy 08 January 2009

very descriptively beautiful, like it much.. nice poem..

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