Thursday, October 4, 2007

(3) One Of These Days Comments

Rating: 3.5

How come You look for me
and pass the weary night with me,
the knock, the voice, the gentle breeze,
the bleeding heart, my misery
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Luis Gil de la Puente
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Afzal Shauq 06 October 2009

How come You look for me and pass the weary night with me, the knock, the voice, the gentle breeze, the bleeding heart, my misery and then still the fail to be the man, the broken dreams. what a sweet way of writing..really impressive and cut to cut words with meaningful thoughts.. really a good poem with a great and meaningful question..and the reply may relate to reality..and what you seek here is a wonderful reply..well done luis gil my friend

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Sandra Fowler 29 March 2009

A small gem of a poem. A poignant image, skillfully sustained. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Laila lili 07 January 2009

wonderful and great words and exprions Good Luck

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Luis Gil de la Puente

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