Oh little bird
My sweet bird!
How can I say
My pain so hard!
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i LOVE it. it is really wonderful by the imagery, poignant by lucid flow wrought ingenious, vibrant, and welled penned i give it a 10++++++++++++
My pain so hard! ........ it is really wonderful by the imagery; yet poignant by lucid flow wrought ingenious, vibrant...........well penned.10+, thanks fopr sharing
S-imple poems you wrote a-re quite clear and true. r-are poet can compose w-itty description of feelings, a-s you do it with simplicity r-hythm and rhyme a beauty!
indeed a well written rythmic poem which longingly immortalizes the pain of the lover whose let the beloved go free only to be stricken by the careless abandonment of the latter....love is cruel and love is hard indeed.well done chowdhury saab!
I love this one its one of my faves
sometimes the old world style renders strength to a poem...
very honest Poem telling of need of a beautiful bird for another! Once again...imagery beautifull and the emtions very real Nice one Dear Poet Wanleisa
Poetry loves the birds. Think about the nightingale in 'Romeo and Juliet' by Shakespeare, its ode by John Keats, till our 'The Lonely Sparrow' by Giacomo Leopardi. The Mr. Chowdhury's course seems: nature - freedom - love, romantic themes. It seems, I'm not a critic.
let out a cry let this day live let me have a deep sigh.........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .... wonderful.. plain simple lovely...10+++
'Am stung By thou love No drug can cure It's thy Only can Give me life so pure! ' Oh my dear Sarwar-my pure poet, the lil bird tells me- do not be so stung- do not weep, you always in her heart no matter what u do-, no matter where u go so cumon smileeeeeeeee A+++ and 10++++++++ well penned. hey you a beautiful sentimental poet haaaan keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! regards anju This goes to my fav list
Very musical, simple heart-felt expression. Really so good......to read to remember.10
the bird can be anything letting the reader think so much on the very unsaid truth 10+
‘…Give me life so pure! ’ Rightly said bird’s song a sure sanitizer of our soul… Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to my page and grace by your comment …please niv