Monday, October 27, 2008

3- Oh Little Bird! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh little bird
My sweet bird!
How can I say
My pain so hard!
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sarwar chowdhury
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 November 2009

‘…Give me life so pure! ’ Rightly said bird’s song a sure sanitizer of our soul… Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to my page and grace by your comment …please niv

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fine little poem sir.. very nice

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

Lovely, cute and touchy.10+++

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XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! 13 November 2008

i LOVE it. it is really wonderful by the imagery, poignant by lucid flow wrought ingenious, vibrant, and welled penned i give it a 10++++++++++++

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 November 2008

My pain so hard! ........ it is really wonderful by the imagery; yet poignant by lucid flow wrought ingenious, vibrant...........well penned.10+, thanks fopr sharing

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Min Sia 10 November 2008

Neatly made..full of innocence! ! ! Definitely a 10! ! !

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Marvin Brato 10 November 2008

S-imple poems you wrote a-re quite clear and true. r-are poet can compose w-itty description of feelings, a-s you do it with simplicity r-hythm and rhyme a beauty!

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 31 October 2008

indeed a well written rythmic poem which longingly immortalizes the pain of the lover whose let the beloved go free only to be stricken by the careless abandonment of the latter....love is cruel and love is hard indeed.well done chowdhury saab!

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I love this one its one of my faves

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Indira Babbellapati 30 October 2008

sometimes the old world style renders strength to a poem...

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Wanelisa Albert 29 October 2008

very honest Poem telling of need of a beautiful bird for another! Once again...imagery beautifull and the emtions very real Nice one Dear Poet Wanleisa

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this poem is great i like it

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 29 October 2008

Poetry loves the birds. Think about the nightingale in 'Romeo and Juliet' by Shakespeare, its ode by John Keats, till our 'The Lonely Sparrow' by Giacomo Leopardi. The Mr. Chowdhury's course seems: nature - freedom - love, romantic themes. It seems, I'm not a critic.

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Trinity K 29 October 2008

let out a cry let this day live let me have a deep sigh.........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .... wonderful.. plain simple lovely...10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 29 October 2008

at your best! thanks for sharing...

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Anjali Sinha 29 October 2008

'Am stung By thou love No drug can cure It's thy Only can Give me life so pure! ' Oh my dear Sarwar-my pure poet, the lil bird tells me- do not be so stung- do not weep, you always in her heart no matter what u do-, no matter where u go so cumon smileeeeeeeee A+++ and 10++++++++ well penned. hey you a beautiful sentimental poet haaaan keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! regards anju This goes to my fav list

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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 October 2008

Very musical, simple heart-felt expression. Really so good......to read to remember.10

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Rakhi Jayashankar 28 October 2008

the bird can be anything letting the reader think so much on the very unsaid truth 10+

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Uriah Hamilton 28 October 2008

Seeking little bird of expansive inspiration.

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Stephanie Saba 28 October 2008

a poem of fine quality, just divine! :) 10+! ! !

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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