Wednesday, October 2, 2013

3 Miserly Men Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was once a family of three miserly men
Miserably miserly they were, spending money was such pain
So when they had to travel for business to another state
For the three they bought only a half ticket.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 September 2014

Very interesting and full of wits.........also very well composed with wise and clever words....pradipji......10/10

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very amusing poem and may be an incident of possibility which attracted me as a reader and man of travel in trains. There were experiences of ticket less travelers and questioning by the TTE as their duty but questioned by the law breaker about his bounded duty.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 October 2013

It was somewhat real, I guess. Wasn't it? However, regardless of whether real or imaginary, the narration of the incident is fluent in verses, and for this I give this beautiful poem a well deserved 10. We sometimes find people around with such ready wits as described here.

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Lorraine Colon 03 October 2013

How clever! This really brightened my day. Loved it.

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