Wednesday, May 14, 2014

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Rating: 5.0

I’ve been composing these poems for a while and posting them for all to see
But the other day while checking out Facebook something occurred to me.

Believe it or not to write these verses takes a little effort...a little time
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Jim Yerman
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Loke Kok Yee 03 April 2016

what you say is so very true, but poetry can be uplifting and yours certainly is thanks

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Paul Reed 19 May 2014

Brilliant, and I know how you feel. People sometimes seem to appreciate things that are strange, and the things we are trying so hard to get across go unnoticed. Very enjoyable JIm.

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Colleen Courtney 14 May 2014

Love this Jim! Well done....kudos to you! Or should I say cheers?

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Anand Brown 14 May 2014

LOL, I dont know if this is a poem or a message written in poetic form, but i liked it nonetheless. You raise important points that are often overlooked, and one does feel that your creative work goes unnoticed even here on poemhunter. Visual stimuliu will always remain better at evoking emotions, i guess us poets will have to take a back seat to the man with a camera. This was an enjoyable read :)

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Gajanan Mishra 14 May 2014

nothing I do will ever compare, I like it, good writing. Please read my poems and comment.

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