silent escape
of evening sun, leaving me
lonely sitting!
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A beautiful three liner! It says your melancholy at the parting of the sun!
We need the sun to illuminate and warm our lives. The world is lonely indeed when such things escape us! 5*****
Naughty sun. it should have told you before leaving! Nice three liner. Enjoyed your piece
Pallab, you have so perfectly expressed the loneliness that one feels at sunset. What a great poem!