('Laughter not time destroyed my voice.
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And then I laugh till tears run down
And the heart thumps at my side
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Very deep poem. I really understood where you were coming from and what you mean. I hope I can write like you someday.
VERY GOOD............ AND ITS REALLY HV VERY DEEP EMOTION......... GOOD..... KEEP IT UP
'Let the love's wind flow by its own choice' - beautiful line, and a beautiful poem full of deep meaning and perception. Love is the ultimate goal that we all seek, and the reason for existing. Without love, life is empty and meaningless. Nicely done, Sarwar. Linda
An inspired piece Sarwar, you have excelled with this 10/10 Lynda xx
Wow, That's an amazing and beautiful poem. You are really talented and this poem shows it. It is so deep and mesmerizing. Keep on Writing! Kat, =)
hey sarwar i think u always had and always used a good talent and great imagination in this poem. but maybe im not able to be precise in this comment coz lot of vocabulary i did't understand. but i will not give up and i will try read more about u. and im sorry see u
As usual, a very nice poem. It takes a good talent to write a good poem You are a bright person.
What love is? ............................like a frog calling the skies...............to pour their hearts out!
Wow! ! ! what a poem! ! ! .... Really nice composition... Wish to read more...
It is a various, deep, rich in influences from different feelings poem. Even though it is a little Spanish speaking, it has its roots in a border land. Not by chance its epigraph is from Yeats, a boundary stone between Romanticism and Twentieth-Century.
Such a wonderful piece...mind strucking, hearts soring to the lines..........a 10.
thought provoking, each lines urges the reader to read further and maintains the tempo right till the end
A beautifully thought out and produced positive poem sir...10/10
an excellent composition..nice flow, nice to read... A10 Ency Bearis
Zero blemish love is scare and rare in real life. Wooo! ! But in poetry everything is possible and poet’s diction gives ditto. Enjoyed Sir with smiling Ten++ dr. sakti. Thanks for comments and rating expecting same on my poems if you please.