I´ve been working on one
And I can feel it strong
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sometimes, the right thread may not be right, and when you want to fly a kite, you don't want to let it go; you want to hold it tight and see how it flies.
A very powerful write, a poem of strong feelings and amazing atmosphere, I realy enjoyed this one 10, without fail Love duncan X
I agree with Duncan; the atmosphere in this poem is amazing..You remind me of how important it is to live -not just exist and what joy there is in little things A beautiful poem from you. With love Pia