Wednesday, September 30, 2009

3 Forgotten Hearts 3 Comments

Rating: 4.3

The boy wonders but he doesn't ask,
It's hard to see the pain behind the mask;
Bearing the burden of a heart she can not mend,
She often hopes that it will all come to an end;
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Wendelin Weird
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The 4am Poet Worm 21 September 2011

very sad but the romance is still there :)

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Kesav Easwaran 18 May 2010

broken without hurting! success always favours the brave... good narrative style...the opening stanza lines really good...10

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