Sunday, September 7, 2008

.3. Another Sample Comments

Rating: 5.0

Would you like a sample?
Shall I cut a slice?
I baked it fresh this morning
And tasting rather nice
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Stacey Watts 16 September 2008

I do love samples as well. I have heard of people going to stores here and taking samples for lunch.. I guess we all love to eat. lol Very clever poem

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Jean Mallette 15 September 2008

This poem is so good it's practically edible! I love it-only now I feel I must bake an apple pie! (10)

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<font color =fusha>Amy 15 September 2008

wow, what a great poem- really involves the reader aswell- well done :)

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Dee Daffodil 10 September 2008

Oh oh! ! Don't tell me you're a baker! ! ! We'll be swapping recipes soon...Autumn harvest cake....bumbleberry pie...triple chocolate zucchini cake! ! ! Whoops! Gotta fly...need to go make strawberry jam! ! ! I love this time of year! : -) A very mouth-watering poem! ! Yumm! ! Hugs, Dee

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Marilyn Lott 09 September 2008

Num num, I would love some, thank you! I can taste it as I read. delicious, a 10! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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