Sunday, July 6, 2008

.3. A Tall Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

I built myself a time machine
And travelled to the past
Where dinosaurs looked hungry
So my visit didn’t last
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David Threadgold
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Shimon Weinroth 14 September 2008

a lot of fun, easily flow and the rhymes aren't forced,

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Marilyn Lott 10 September 2008

I love your fun and humerous imagination in rhyming form. Good job, David! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Ellie Sutton 27 August 2008

Great giggle! Great poem

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 12 July 2008

Excellent imagery similar to that of HG wells.Good poem my 10

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Andrew Lockley 06 July 2008

Good poem =]

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