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NOORIE or Black Berry Ali! Nice one... but the One thing that I dont like is the GIVE UP at last you know. Dont give up... DOnt ever give up.. for example.. I would If I had a chance to Without being Brutally Attacked I would. Well this is your poem.. but If I will talk further more... IF IF IF... NO dont afraid from brutally attacked becoz.. DEATH will comes ONCE not multi times.. JUST GO ahead and do what you want.. so why not fight for the thing that You want to DO right :) ? IF IF IF will keep you on back stage... anyway.. I like this poem :) Good... GO more in depth ok