good but break up the long lines for astetic consistency
because thts the ticket,
ill love you and itll never go
unless you open up the door
but even then ill close it
stand infront of you
so u can seethat
my love is pure
and its.....
keep it up you obciously hear things in a metred rhyme
so whos the gilr? Caught her yet?
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good but break up the long lines for astetic consistency because thts the ticket, ill love you and itll never go unless you open up the door but even then ill close it stand infront of you so u can seethat my love is pure and its..... keep it up you obciously hear things in a metred rhyme so whos the gilr? Caught her yet?