Thursday, February 2, 2012

2nd February Comments

Rating: 4.5

Like air next to the water fall
Like a blue sky and a moon at day light
Like the sun shadow the moon at night
Like a rain from heaven I have fall
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Zibele Mrasi
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Nurain Ali-balogun 19 February 2012

A dozen lines written on the sky, falling amazingly on my eyes. Good poetry man,

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 17 February 2012

Wow man! superb poem my friend, the love bug has strike you.

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John Carse 04 February 2012

Thank you for your kind remarks and for reading my poems. I really like this one of yours - you have captured a moment in words and that's what poetry is all about. Regards

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Ebi Robert 03 February 2012

The genesis of the poem drew my suspense but the end is amazing. Quit suprising. Great.

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Gift Macozoma 03 February 2012

Beautiful nana.. One bit of human nature that cannot alter o evolve..that's love

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Young Church Poetry 02 February 2012

Falling in love is an amazing thing, well done.

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