Sunday, August 31, 2008

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I Am WILlInG To GiVe YoU A SeCoNd ChAnCe
BeCaUsE ThE LoVe We WoRkEd So HaRd To BuILd StILL ReMaInS
BuT I Am AfrAiD
AfRaId ThAt At ThE EnD
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Frandy Osias Louis
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Shilesha Johnson 31 August 2008

wow this poem is very strong and very deep. this girl you are writing abou is very lucky. and im sure she knows that. she will not take you for granted and understands how you feel. but even though you hurt her, it's not okay for you to do it back cause when things do go back to normal she won't want to be with you. you are going to push her away. she loves you with all of her heart and made a very huge mistake that she regrets. she's sorry. and loves you more then anything else in the world. great poem

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