Thursday, February 11, 2016

296. Bandages Comments

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You tried to wrap a bandage around my heart
to cover all the the wounds
you had caused with your words
but it had no effect
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Jaden Knight
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Bri Edwards 08 June 2016

Profanisaurus, HOLY SHIT! ! ! This is a fantastic poem, and it shall be proudly placed by me into my/our June showcase for PH poets! thanks bunches! your serious, sad, hurt. love-lost poems remind me of Lora Colon's poems, but unlike her, you also write some very silly ones as well. i enjoy both kinds, though i tend towards silliness. bri :) i especially enjoyed the 2nd stanza.

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