295. The Crow And The Butterfly Comments

to MyPoemList. i like that you did not hold yourself to a restricting rhyme scheme. great. but the rhymes you used were nice indeed. a fine couple you have imagined for us. they AREN'T real are they? imagine............a crow and a butterfly! they could have awesome offspring OR awful offspring. as close as we can be to forever ..........forever is how i would spell it, but i believe you and some other good british commonwealth poets have used for ever in the past. maybe you are becoming 'americanized. bri :)