29 June Comments

Such palpable tangible poetic images

Wow! This is really incredible...

That is also my mom's birthday. ''Great write! ''

This sounds like a great loss Eila, expressed in a beautifully formed poem. I don't know what happened on that date but I feel your pain. Tai

So much said in so few words, no failed poet lives here! ! ! Love duncan X

Fourteen words that profoundly images, and depicts the Efflorescent Death... Fine Penning, Eila''''''''''''''''''fjr

Nothing is certain poem says.................Exceptional! Eila.