Sunday, October 18, 2009

29-5-09- Convincing Lies Comments

Rating: 5.0

The chapter is finished and so the story has reached the end,
He’s no longer the love of my life, barely even a friend.
I’m proud to say that he no longer sweeps me off my feet,
And his smile no longer makes my heart skip a beat.
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Brooke Luchich
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Seema Chowdhury 09 March 2010

a nice convincing poem. hope it turns out to be tru for you. take care pl see my poems of 2010 on pg1

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Ahtivah Lawton 12 January 2010

its like your poems are right on time with my life....it sill how we can tell a convincing lie...and yet telling foolish truth....i luuv this poem.....

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Hailey Agnew 18 October 2009

: ') i love it, its like you took the words right oughta my head.10+

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Brooke Luchich

Brooke Luchich

Darwin, NT
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