28th Feb Comments
I know he had more days left in his life
But on 28th feb, I fought with my sis
And I went home alone from the hospital
To daddy, to seize the tears and get a kiss.
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Amen to what Kelly Kurt said. Always listen to Kelly. He's the expert on this site. Anything that happened was not your fault. Don't blame yourself.
A lovely poem expressing feelings that we all have experienced at a time of loss. Yet, I admit we do not all come to grips with our feelings as well. Well done. Read mine – Cicatrix – Adeline
A poignant write Fabre.. But I agree with Kelly.. You can do far better.. Thanks for sharing Farbe..
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A sad and unfortunate story, Farbe. You told it with a factual style but I think you could have gone deeper into the feelings you had. Thanks for sharing and keep writing
A sad intense read Farbe. You have a talent for great poetry...10
He first suffered paralysis And then shortly after that, he quit Maybe he saw a nightmare regarding me And his body just couldn't tolerate it. very emotive write liked keep writing
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7/20/2025 10:31:27 PM # 1.0.0
A sad and painful story of irreplaceable loss told with clarity of thought. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Farbe.