Monday, January 4, 2016
280. Father Time's New Year Comments
Rating: ★5.0
As the clock ticks closer to midnight
the pale old man sighs aloud
and puts his book down on his bedside table
it will soon be time for his transformation
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Kumarmani Mahakul
04 January 2016
Time is very tricky to show magic on new year. Fantastic work shared.10
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8/20/2025 6:18:27 AM # 1.0.0
Very well written in spite of this free verse thing. I would enjoy it so much more in standard rhyming verse. However I was entertained. The images are vivid. I promise to shut up about free verse. I hate repetition myself.