The day when the best present came to me...
when i was three years old...
when she was assleep,
it was her i wanted to hold...
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that's so nice, a beautiful poem for your little sister. good job...keep writing.
I don't think that's sad, I think it's beautiful! Very very honest too. Good work Kuji.
so sweet and wonderful poem. so beautifully said...
ya sarah i know here......when she was attending the violin lessons with us every time she hurts her head(kanet betet5ebet fel 3arda beta3et el ballet) ..haha...i saw her last time and she was grown up.......God bless her for you....nice poem indeed..
I can see why 'November 27th,1999 was a special day.Your decriptions and images of your lovely sister is striking. A lovely poem that expresses how much you love Sarah. a 10
woooow amazing description. i loved it whats ure age? any way its amazing
Wow. Very beautiful. Very descriptive about sister love. I love it. It's really beautiful. Allie♥
A nice poem Kuji that has the love you have for your sister oozing from it. Always write like this, from your heart. Heath
a good poem.. impressive from a tiny little poet kuji...well 10/10