Monday, September 21, 2009

27th Of November 1999 Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day when the best present came to me...
when i was three years old...
when she was assleep,
it was her i wanted to hold...
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Kuji soliman
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Afzal Shauq 06 December 2009

a good poem.. impressive from a tiny little poet kuji...well 10/10

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Hugo Sanchez 28 September 2009

that's so nice, a beautiful poem for your little sister. good job...keep writing.

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Robin Stevens 24 September 2009

I don't think that's sad, I think it's beautiful! Very very honest too. Good work Kuji.

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 22 September 2009

so sweet and wonderful poem. so beautifully said...

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Omar Ibrahim 22 September 2009

ya sarah i know here......when she was attending the violin lessons with us every time she hurts her head(kanet betet5ebet fel 3arda beta3et el ballet) ..haha...i saw her last time and she was grown up.......God bless her for you....nice poem indeed..

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 21 September 2009

I can see why 'November 27th,1999 was a special day.Your decriptions and images of your lovely sister is striking. A lovely poem that expresses how much you love Sarah. a 10

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Mohammad Mahmoudi 21 September 2009

woooow amazing description. i loved it whats ure age? any way its amazing

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Allie Rodriguez 21 September 2009

Wow. Very beautiful. Very descriptive about sister love. I love it. It's really beautiful. Allie♥

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Kendall Cook 21 September 2009

wow that really good keep it up

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Heath Gunn 21 September 2009

A nice poem Kuji that has the love you have for your sister oozing from it. Always write like this, from your heart. Heath

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Carol Gall 21 September 2009

very nice poem about love for a sister well written

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