Monday, August 27, 2007

(.........27aug) Myth Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

My sleeping body is a field lying fallow,
dark loam of flesh folded in on itself,
imbibing mysteries. When I rise,
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Max Reif
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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 04 September 2007

Max - You have such a noble and gracious spirit.....and I agree, the depths of our love, and largess can be endless. Blessings to you - Cheryl

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Coll B. Lue 27 August 2007

I like the way the verse takes shape - from the rise and return to 'dream earth'. Nicely written and enjoyable to re-read. Thanks for sharing, Coll

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Raveendran . 27 August 2007

I simply like this piece.

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