Wednesday, December 16, 2015

267. The Other Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The other night I met a girl the worse for drink
wearing a torn dress of white and pink
staggering around all over the place
her makeup smudged all over her face
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Jaden Knight
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Darwin Henry Beuning 21 December 2015

John, I enjoyed your poem. Having served in the military for 21 years, I know that after a few drinks and long after midnight, we all turn into sailors, Any Port in the Storm.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 December 2015

Very amazing poem shared with topic of life. Wisely moving poem shared is motivational.10

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