(26) The Night He Visited Me... Comments

You held a white swan With so much gentle care, I was peeping from the leaves; You didn't know I was there. i like these lines in your poem very much. very sensual. and your desire and love is portrayed well. you have a lot of imagination. work on it and you will become a great poetess. God bless you tony

Name the guy Please Its beautiful.....

great and fantastic writing.. Far from the stars Came a ray of light. It lit up your face And I saw you all night! a relevant photograph u posted. ; -) cheers