26 January.. Comments

देशवासियों में देशभक्ति की कमी नहीं लेकिन सामाजिक व राजनैतिक क्षेत्रों में मचे घमासान की वजह से जो देश की दुर्दशा हो रही है उस पर नियंत्रण न लगाया गया तो इस गणतंत्र की गरिमा को चोट पहुंचेगी. बहुत सुंदर कथ्य. Is din tak pahunchne k lie desh ne die bahut balidaan hai / Jai jawan jai kisaan mera bharat mahaan hai / Aj k din se hi bharat loktantrik kehlaya hai / Haye re kaisa desh hogya mera / Bharashtachar se lipt ho gya desh mera

Bahut badiya varnan kiya hai aapne...26 Jan is precious to all Indians and it makes them proud as well..10++

Brilliant Abhilasa... I had tears reading this.. True emotions and pure poetry.. Wonderful work.. Bohoot hi khoobsurat hai.. On a persoal note, I loved how you criticised the pathetic misogynistic atttitude of the country... We need better place for women in our country.. Thank you very much.. Jai Hind!

Basanti chola od kar bhagat ne jis maa ki laaj ko bachaya tha Laaj bachate hue praanon ko aazaadi ki aahutu chadaya tha Maila ho gya bharat maa ka aj wahi aanchal kukarmon se beton k hi uske uski izzat ganwai hai Shok manati hogi maa bhi kaisa ye din aj mere pooton ne dikhaya hai ..... grrrt lines to remark the essence of the poem.... grt thoughts penned mam...... really pleasure to read it... thanx for sharing......