Monday, November 20, 2006

26 - I Look But Can'T Touch Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watch the birds over head as they cut through the sky
Envious of their freedom as they elegantly fly
Wishing that it were I that was leaving this place
To search of love and passion for my soul to grace
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Brian Dorn 23 December 2006

Nicola, I like the concept of the burning bridge... the perfect choice of imagery and meaning. Well done! ! Brian

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Anna Russell 04 December 2006

Not notice you? He's clearly not right in the head - forget him! 10 from me. Hugs Anna xxx

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Sandra Fowler 26 November 2006

Powerful, genuine and very original. Write on, Nicola. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ian Curtis 22 November 2006

Again a brilliant piece of writting All the best Ian

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