257. The Perfect Relation-Ship Comments

ya know, i JUST figured out why you typed relation-ship instead of relationship. brilliant! ! ! :) bri

i love how the first stanza and the last connect the generations and repeat most of the words. the part about the children not being put ashore, until the correct time, is nice also. unfortunately the weaker ones [weaker relationships] will often have children as well. you are an example of one such child (i think) who did not drown (completely) , but is still treading water and from time to time making steady headway in life, especially with your poems! this is another fine poem to go into MyPoemsList AND to go into my/our November A showcase for PH poets, Section B. thanks for sharing, my friend. now, go have a whoop-dee-do red-shirt and blue-tie week. bri : :) :)

Gathering wood and searching life in beaches is amazing expression of daily common life. To buildup relationship together is too nice and wise.10