255. Last Halloween Comments

Profanaisaurus, my second reading noticed a typo here: hoping that this one with be a little less so. hope you aren't spooked by it! can you tell witch word is not 'right'? I hit a zombie with a bat before it flew off in a huff it ran to its mummy for help and it told them to not be so rough ...........love this stanza [but them? ] hey, i just used the word huff in a poem i wrote last night! i think mine rhymed with 'enough'. we ARE great ‘rhymers’, aren't WE! ? I had an argument on a witch........... i know you limeys speak differently than we colonists (ex-colonists i should say) , but on? i suppose you could have been on her? you don't have to tell me. BUT, if you change it to 'with a witch', i'd like it better and you'd pick up a nice alliteration as well. hmm? favorite lines: but worry ye not dear friends because it only happened inside my head and he ran off crying when I threatened him with a well done steak.............BUT IT TOOK ME three readings to realize/realise …………………………………………………………………that this was a 'play on words', with steak/stake. BRILLLANT! THIS shall go into MyPoemList and replace your poem in Section B of the a showcase for PH poets: October which is on my site here. i really like the 'holiday', and the poem, and that you asked to put it in just before H-day. have a happy! bri :) p.s. i see you have two more 'halloween' poems in your list. i'll try to remember to peek at them another day.