What God has ordained
can’t be avoided
We can’t see the marks
on people and places,
...
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i absolutely LOVE this poem: its depth and wisdom! thanks for sharing! u.
A powerful statement Max, one that hits the reader with a force. there is an almost biblical prophestic feel to this, tempered by reassurance (nature being the servant of God) Excellent piece Max!
I felt a chill as I read this, Max. I don; t play around with fate...so I try not to think about it too much. :) I really loved your final stanza. Raynette
Very nice Max!