Wednesday, August 31, 2011

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Tension rising
Holding on
Over my head
Marking my heart
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Tori Bachue
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Stefanie Fontker 31 August 2011

I like your style, and this poem. It's very choppy, and seems to flow well in its chaos. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your poetry.

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