Tuesday, September 1, 2015

244. All I Can See Is You Comments

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There are over 100 people in this room
all of them in brightly coloured clothes
but all I can see is you
in your dark blue dress with flowers in your hair
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Jaden Knight
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Abigail Hauschild 24 September 2015

Very sweet :) well written

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Abegail Chua 01 September 2015

Great poem! I could visualize being in that room with you and your bride. This is so sweet.

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